Hi Shaye, I liked your creativity in your story, like choosing potatoes! Next time you could use speech marks when someone is talking. We have written a similar story in room 6. from Room 6
Hi Shaye , I like how creative you got with this story like potatoes . Next time maybe you could add in a couple of pictures or maybe even make your own . I love how you added in the stars at the start of the slideshow.
Hi Shaye,
ReplyDeleteI liked your creativity in your story, like choosing potatoes! Next time you could use speech marks when someone is talking. We have written a similar story in room 6.
from Room 6
Hi Shaye ,
ReplyDeleteI like how creative you got with this story like potatoes . Next time maybe you could add in a couple of pictures or maybe even make your own . I love how you added in the stars at the start of the slideshow.